 "Welcome to Oblivion", Issue 001 - Rate & Discuss |
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 May 22 2009, 04:56 PM
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 Leviathan  Group: Admin Posts: 3,121 Joined: 9-January 09 From: UK Member No.: 2  |
Welcome to Oblivion Written by Mark Adams Art by Anna Cover by Anna Pin-Up by Luis Barroso Rate and discuss the first issue of the Hellbound Chronicles.  We'd love for you to leave feedback and not just a vote, let us know what you want to see, where you want the series to go, as we wnat to develop this with the feedback of those reading it. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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May 22 2009, 07:00 PM
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Skinless Fodder Group: Members Posts: 3 Joined: 1-March 09 From: The Netherlands Member No.: 102 |
Wow, Mark gave me the link of the website with the comics. and i must say: Excellent!! The usage of the shadows in this artwork is very very creepy and eerie.. It gave me the same feeling while watching the original movie...
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May 22 2009, 10:43 PM
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 Cenobite Group: Comic Editors Posts: 266 Joined: 9-January 09 Member No.: 5 |
QUOTE (chapa'ai @ May 22 2009, 02:00 PM)  Wow, Mark gave me the link of the website with the comics. and i must say: Excellent!! The usage of the shadows in this artwork is very very creepy and eerie.. It gave me the same feeling while watching the original movie... Thanks for your feedback! I agree, they did a great job really evoking desolation and despair here. I think future HBC contributors can learn a thing or two from this issue in particular as far as mood goes. Stick around... more to come 
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May 23 2009, 10:47 AM
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 Puzzle Guardian Group: Members Posts: 211 Joined: 20-January 09 From: Manchester, UK Member No.: 66 |
this one has to be my fave so far, its so dark and true to the mythos.
but i do feel the story didn't really end... i think there could easily be a part2 to this chapter. easily. --------------------  |
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May 23 2009, 04:01 PM
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Cenobite Group: Comic Editors Posts: 266 Joined: 9-January 09 Member No.: 5 |
If you want to, you're more than welcome to write one =)
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May 23 2009, 04:41 PM
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Puzzle Guardian Group: Members Posts: 211 Joined: 20-January 09 From: Manchester, UK Member No.: 66 |
ha! as if i have the imagination. lol
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May 24 2009, 05:31 PM
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Leviathan Group: Admin Posts: 3,121 Joined: 9-January 09 From: UK Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (nathan @ May 23 2009, 11:47 AM) this one has to be my fave so far, its so dark and true to the mythos. but i do feel the story didn't really end... i think there could easily be a part2 to this chapter. easily. Yeha, my bad really. I tried to make it end on a wham impact moment that, really, would work better with a rising musical acommpaniment. I think to feel really concluded it probably needed a more fitting 'comic' ending. but we live and learn. Glad you enjoyed the dark feel. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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May 24 2009, 05:56 PM
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Engineer's Experiment Group: Members Posts: 109 Joined: 9-January 09 From: Netherlands Member No.: 11 |
Same for me this comic has a bit of open ending. Perhaps there can be shown how Thomas is being morphed in a cenobite or so, or being tortured. But well, it's ok for an ending
The art of this comic is great as well, and 1 of the comics with the most pages so far. |
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May 24 2009, 09:20 PM
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 Puzzle Guardian Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 12-January 09 From: DFW, Texas Member No.: 44 |
This is a great story, and any outing that takes us into a Labyrinth is a good one, in my opinion. Very good use of black and white/negatives in some panels, especially. Reminded me of the Forbidden.
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May 24 2009, 09:46 PM
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 Angel of Suffering Group: Comic Editors Posts: 796 Joined: 9-January 09 From: At the Gates of Midian Member No.: 16 |
QUOTE (Phlebiac @ May 24 2009, 01:56 PM) Same for me this comic has a bit of open ending. Perhaps there can be shown how Thomas is being morphed in a cenobite or so, or being tortured. But well, it's ok for an ending The art of this comic is great as well, and 1 of the comics with the most pages so far. I don't think he should ascend to Cenobitehood. He doesn't strike me as Ceno material somehow. -------------------- So let the truth be wrung from veil and sanctum undone... that the Banished Ones intent on reinstatement have won.
QUOTE (Lamia @ Feb 7 2009, 08:43 AM) I'm really glad you're a member of THW, I think you're awesome. :D |
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May 25 2009, 10:47 AM
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Puzzle Guardian Group: Members Posts: 211 Joined: 20-January 09 From: Manchester, UK Member No.: 66 |
oh don't get me wrong, it wasn't a bad thing! it was positive! it left me wanting more! that's good...
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May 29 2009, 09:08 PM
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Leviathan Group: Admin Posts: 3,121 Joined: 9-January 09 From: UK Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (nathan @ May 25 2009, 11:47 AM) oh don't get me wrong, it wasn't a bad thing! it was positive! it left me wanting more! that's good... Glad you guys have enjoyed it, I've ehard soem ncie comments off board as well, it means a lot. And this is just the start of what we hope will be a long, exciting series of comic stories. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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Jun 9 2009, 08:52 PM
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 Skinless Fodder Group: Members Posts: 4 Joined: 7-June 09 From: Ye Olde Europe Member No.: 180 |
Loved it, I'm looking forward to more of the fan comics.
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Jun 9 2009, 09:06 PM
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Leviathan Group: Admin Posts: 3,121 Joined: 9-January 09 From: UK Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (Duke @ Jun 9 2009, 09:52 PM) Loved it, I'm looking forward to more of the fan comics. Thanks for the kind words! Issue #2 is currently being prepared. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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Jun 26 2009, 08:04 AM
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Tortured Soul Group: Members Posts: 43 Joined: 26-March 09 Member No.: 128 |
Decent story but not a fan of the blurry smudge effect on the panels.
Also the art suffers a bit with it looking a little too "digital." I'm sure someone will come back with well do one yourself and well sure. -------------------- People perceive evil as being a force that abides by rules some deity set aside. Evil is absence of either good or bad, right or wrong. It is neither kind nor cruel. It only serves its own purpose, to its own means. Its nature is simple. Its a beast that will tear you apart in spite of your religion, faith or humanity.
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Jun 30 2009, 04:53 PM
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Cenobite Group: Comic Editors Posts: 266 Joined: 9-January 09 Member No.: 5 |
Nah, we appreciate honest criticism as long as it's polite. Next time I give it a read, I'll have your feedback in mind.
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Nov 4 2009, 05:59 AM
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 Skinless Fodder Group: Members Posts: 20 Joined: 11-January 09 From: México Member No.: 33 |
Some of the panels had real photos in them? looks good, simple and darker, really awesome first issue.
Some friends said the labyrinth looked like harry potter's library, I don't think so. I wish there were more detailed close-ups of the cenobite. The ending with Leviathan is classic. The pinUp, hahaha well, I was really experimenting styles (also, the image was forced in the page format, the cenobites look taller, the original image is wider), I'm doing other PinUp more detailed for use in any future issue 
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Dec 8 2009, 07:46 PM
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 Skinless Fodder Group: Members Posts: 12 Joined: 8-December 09 From: Silkeborg, Denmark Member No.: 311 |
Another B&W comic, but great painting style. The eye on p. 4 reminds me of "Songs of Metal and Flesh", and the Tour de Hell is a classic HR theme.
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May 10 2010, 04:15 PM
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 Puzzle Guardian Group: Members Posts: 198 Joined: 9-January 09 From: The Seventh Circle Member No.: 6 |
Liked it. Good artwork.
-------------------- My nose is on fire and I have fifteen wild badgers living in my trousers.
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