 "My Turn", Issue 005 - Rate & Discuss |
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 Oct 13 2009, 11:39 AM
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 Leviathan  Group: Admin Posts: 3,061 Joined: 9-January 09 From: UK Member No.: 2  |
My Turn
Written by Alexa Black Art by Jaz Cover by Jaz Pin-Up by Jaz Online Version: http://www.cenobite.com/hellbound/hbc005/hbc005cover.htm Archive with PDF Version: http://www.cenobite.com/hellbound/archive.htm Rate and discuss the fifth issue of the Hellbound Chronicles. We'd love for you to leave feedback,not just a vote, let us know what you want to see, where you want the series to go, where you think the art and writing can improve. "My Turn" is one of my favourite comics produced yet, I think Jaz's art has incredible life, colour and passion to it, bringing Alexa's fantastic visual concepts too life. It's striking, bold and and full of great ideas, in my opinion. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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Oct 13 2009, 12:57 PM
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 Puzzle Guardian Group: Members Posts: 211 Joined: 20-January 09 From: Manchester, UK Member No.: 66 |
well
in my opinion the best fan comic so far. it has everything, good cenobite designs, good box design, good story. good artwork. its very original, aside from the peeled arm (even the T2 reference was a good homage) i really liked it, i love to see it from a skeletal dragon's POV. very good, i look forward to more work from you guys. well done! xx --------------------  |
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Oct 13 2009, 04:48 PM
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Engineer's Experiment Group: Members Posts: 109 Joined: 9-January 09 From: Netherlands Member No.: 11 |
Nicely done
 One of the longest comics so far  Still being a pervert but i like the nudity
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Oct 14 2009, 08:16 PM
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 Cenobite Group: Comic Editors Posts: 263 Joined: 9-January 09 Member No.: 5 |
I thought the two full-page images were magnificent, on par with the great HR imagery. The male character did not strike me as the obsessive type to really want to open the box, but that is my only criticism.
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Oct 17 2009, 03:49 PM
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 Angel of Suffering Group: Comic Editors Posts: 796 Joined: 9-January 09 From: At the Gates of Midian Member No.: 16 |
hey all! Thank you very much for your comments. Nathan, I'm very flattered by that praise. It's a wonderful project and I'm glad to be part of it. :-)
And I want to especially thank Jazz, because her art is absolutely fantastic. I couldn't believe how beautiful it was, and I'm deeply honored to have such lovely art illustrating my words. -------------------- So let the truth be wrung from veil and sanctum undone... that the Banished Ones intent on reinstatement have won.
QUOTE (Lamia @ Feb 7 2009, 08:43 AM)  I'm really glad you're a member of THW, I think you're awesome. :D |
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Nov 4 2009, 05:41 AM
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 Skinless Fodder Group: Members Posts: 20 Joined: 11-January 09 From: México Member No.: 33 |
Ah, a good old fashion hand-made comic, page 11 is really impressive haha the box dragon making it with that guy.
The story is good, some minor flaws in the drawing (the skinned arm changed from right to left in page 10), but overall a very good issue. |
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Nov 4 2009, 09:28 PM
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 Engineer's Experiment Group: Members Posts: 76 Joined: 12-January 09 From: The Belt Buckle Of The Bible Belt Member No.: 43 |
I really enjoyed the comic myself. Both story and art were really good, and I'm not just saying that because I'm friends with both writer and artist. I really mean it.
I can't really think of anything to critique on since everything I would have said has been said already by other HBW-ers.
-------------------- "Du kannst, Du willst und wirst nie vergeben
und Du verteufelst sein ganzes Leben treibst in den Wahnsinn von maßlosem Zorn, Vernichtung und Rache, Du bist zum Hassen gebor'n!" |
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May 10 2010, 04:12 PM
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 Puzzle Guardian Group: Members Posts: 197 Joined: 9-January 09 From: The Seventh Circle Member No.: 6 |
Gotta love hot monster sex.
-------------------- My nose is on fire and I have fifteen wild badgers living in my trousers.
Heh, Amy, we're in yur wombz, namin yur babee.- Itsari |
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Jul 25 2010, 09:57 PM
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 Puzzle Guardian Group: Members Posts: 175 Joined: 5-July 10 From: surrey, UK Member No.: 505 |
I found it rather refreshing to have a story from a guardians point of view and the fact it was a really good story is an added bonus and flowed perfectly with the artwork. The monster sex was a nice touch
-------------------- I'd buy that for a dollar!!!
"No matter how lame or geeky you may feel, remeber this: At least you're not playing Runescape" |
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Jul 28 2010, 09:08 AM
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Leviathan Group: Admin Posts: 3,061 Joined: 9-January 09 From: UK Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (chainman @ Jul 25 2010, 10:57 PM) I found it rather refreshing to have a story from a guardians point of view and the fact it was a really good story is an added bonus and flowed perfectly with the artwork. The monster sex was a nice touch Hot monster sex is a staple of Barker's work so it was good to feature a take on that.  Glad you enjoyed it, I really like the ideas of the Guardians having potential for being 'jealous' of the Cenobites compared to their own roles.- Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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Aug 1 2010, 02:31 PM
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Angel of Suffering Group: Comic Editors Posts: 796 Joined: 9-January 09 From: At the Gates of Midian Member No.: 16 |
QUOTE (chainman @ Jul 25 2010, 05:57 PM) I found it rather refreshing to have a story from a guardians point of view and the fact it was a really good story is an added bonus and flowed perfectly with the artwork. The monster sex was a nice touch Thanks Chainman! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And hot monster sex is always good and I'm glad you liked my version of it. ;-) -------------------- So let the truth be wrung from veil and sanctum undone... that the Banished Ones intent on reinstatement have won.
QUOTE (Lamia @ Feb 7 2009, 08:43 AM) I'm really glad you're a member of THW, I think you're awesome. :D |
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