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Apr 28 2010, 08:59 AM
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Sisters Under the Skin Written by Gordon Napier Art by Jesse Thomas Cover by Jesse Thomas Pin-Up by Sabre Colours by Luis Barroso Online Version: http://www.cenobite.com/hellbound/hbc010/hbc010cover.htm Archive with PDF Version: http://www.cenobite.com/hellbound/archive.htm Rate and discuss the tenth issue of the Hellbound Chronicles. We'd love for you to leave feedback if possible, not just a vote, let us know what you want to see, where you want the series to go, where you think the art and writing can improve. Thanks to everyone who has commented so far and enjoyed the series, here's to the next ten! - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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Apr 29 2010, 08:00 PM
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Engineer's Experiment ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 109 Joined: 9-January 09 From: Netherlands Member No.: 11 |
Nice comic
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Apr 30 2010, 12:27 AM
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third story, actually, this follows issue 3, "her room in hell." great work here all around, imho.
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Apr 30 2010, 04:51 AM
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Tortured Soul ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 45 Joined: 14-January 09 From: Northeast Pennsylvania Member No.: 56 |
Very good, but the lettering could have been a bit larger.
-------------------- Unbearable, isn't it? The suffering of strangers. The agony of friends. There is a secret song at the center of the world, Joey, and its sound is like razors through flesh."
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Apr 30 2010, 12:07 PM
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Very good, but the lettering could have been a bit larger. if it helps, the online version, you can click the image to see the full size version. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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May 1 2010, 10:19 AM
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![]() Engineer's Experiment ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Comic Editors Posts: 63 Joined: 1-December 09 From: Wales Member No.: 305 |
I liked this one. The artwork was great and I was glad to see a skinless character as this is one of the elements I liked from the original movies that has been absent from previous comics.
I agree with the point about the lettering but I think that might be a inherent problem with presenting the comics on the web. Maybe white on black would work better though. Also a minor criticism was there seemed to be too many large blocks of text when perhaps they weren’t needed. For example, do we need to have the skinless woman described to us when we can see her? Still, all in all, a very good final product. |
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May 3 2010, 07:21 PM
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haven't read it yet, but I am really digging the artwork
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| Guest_Guest_fomorian_*_* |
May 8 2010, 03:21 PM
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Guests |
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May 8 2010, 03:30 PM
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My congratulations to the artist, colourist and editor. It came out beautifully, and the characters were nicely realized.
I didn't write this as a comic script, it was adapted by the editor from a short story I wrote several years ago. 'Her Room in Hell', the first part of it, has already been turned into a comic, and there may be a couple more coming in the same series. |
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May 8 2010, 04:37 PM
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My congratulations to the artist, colourist and editor. It came out beautifully, and the characters were nicely realized. I didn't write this as a comic script, it was adapted by the editor from a short story I wrote several years ago. 'Her Room in Hell', the first part of it, has already been turned into a comic, and there may be a couple more coming in the same series. You do yourself a disservice Gordon, though. pretty much every word and image here is yours and you should be proud at such an excellent story. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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May 9 2010, 06:12 AM
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Engineer's Experiment ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 87 Joined: 26-April 10 Member No.: 468 |
I really liked it. This comic, and the previous one stirred something in my heart. Looking at Lee hanging there made feel a little melancholy. Especially when she was worrying about her friends and family. They could probably leave her alone and she would suffer for eternity. Regret can be the strongest pain there is.
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May 10 2010, 03:58 PM
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![]() Puzzle Guardian ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 197 Joined: 9-January 09 From: The Seventh Circle Member No.: 6 |
A great follow up to Her Room In Hell. So excited to have a continuation of the story.
-------------------- My nose is on fire and I have fifteen wild badgers living in my trousers.
Heh, Amy, we're in yur wombz, namin yur babee.- Itsari |
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| Guest_Otomo_* |
May 15 2010, 04:04 AM
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Great stuff. I really enjoyed it. The link to Jesse's artist page on the main site is broken though!
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May 15 2010, 12:36 PM
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Great stuff. I really enjoyed it. The link to Jesse's artist page on the main site is broken though! Thanks for pointing that out, got it fixed, although the page itself seems to be flawed. Not sure how that happened, will try and fix it when I get the chance. Glad you enjoyed the comic. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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| Guest_otomo_* |
May 15 2010, 06:18 PM
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Thanks for pointing that out, got it fixed, although the page itself seems to be flawed. Not sure how that happened, will try and fix it when I get the chance. Glad you enjoyed the comic. - Scarecrow You guys have some pretty high quality work on here. Found you on web comic list. I've actually never seen hellraiser and still found them enjoyable. |
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May 17 2010, 02:19 AM
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Thank you so much for your feedback, it's nice to have a fresh perspective, and that it's positive is encouraging, of course.
Brian |
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Jun 16 2010, 09:55 PM
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Nice, realistic artwork although i would like to see a bit more detail on the skinles character, like the veigns mentioned in the text.
The story startet out a bit slow with the nun thing, it felt like it was there just to fill the pages, but if it's part of the previous comic I apologize cuz i didn't read that one yet :$ |
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Jun 17 2010, 06:31 PM
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Nice, realistic artwork although i would like to see a bit more detail on the skinles character, like the veigns mentioned in the text. The story startet out a bit slow with the nun thing, it felt like it was there just to fill the pages, but if it's part of the previous comic I apologize cuz i didn't read that one yet :$ Well, hope you like the first part when you read it. The background was there, really, to help not only explore Lee's backstory but show a dialogue between her and Rina, suggesting a potential for friendship before the reveal. At leats, that wa spartly the intent. - Scarecrow -------------------- "Liberate tutemet ex inferis"
"We've so many things to show you, Alma. So many wonderous sights for you to see. I almost envy you. Hell has so many wonders for its newcomers..." - Pinhead "To be able to fly? To be smoke, or a wolf... to know the night, and live in it forever? That's not so bad. You call us monsters. But when you dream it's of flying, and changing, and living without death." "That's about when I lost faith in Jesus... when I realized the only bits that worked for me were the p*rn" |
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Jun 21 2010, 05:06 AM
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I liked the backstory on Lee since she is one of my favorite characters in the whole series thus far, but I appreciate your differing opinion. There is certainly no pressure to fill pages, however...
The detail comment is an interesting one, I'll try to keep that in mind when I read it again and perhaps also for future issues. |
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Jul 25 2010, 10:22 PM
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I actually liked the descriptive writing style; using the art as a visual aid rather than the complete picture and allowing the reader to fill in the gaps made me feel more involed in the story. Double thumbs up from me peeps.
-------------------- I'd buy that for a dollar!!!
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